Ian+P.

Ian.P

=FOOTBALL CONCUSSION=

Outline
I am choosing the topic of football concussions because I think many people do not know how serious it is. If you have two concussions your //brain//, your brain is in the state of a 76 year old! Many people are afraid of telling their coach if they have a concussion because they want to play more. Studies have shown that concussions can lead to depression and even suicide New technology has been created in helmets. For example two football had concussions both of them killed them selves. Later doctors examined their brain. They had abnormal proteins in their brains. Both of them had mental damage to the brain. Another player who had over 15 concussions brain was at the status of a 80 year old, he was only 40.

=Script=

Characters
1. Ian P.-Me 2. Ms.Wolbers-Appearance 3. Other teachers' interviews

Scenes
Act One-Introduction to a football concussion Act Two-The brain of a concussion Act Three- What we can do

Act One Video of someone getting Concussion on Poly Field-Someone getting tackled in slow-mo with helmet impact (No narration) {Players are Chris.P against Willem. Willem tackled Chris.P and he goes flying} Drawing of skull and helmet {Effected brain and not effected brain} Interview with someone who has seen or a concussion or knows about concussions-In the library background of books

Act Two Different drawings of brains Interview with science teacher about brains Video of kid with concussion- Fake scene of kid with pads on bench feeling the pain of a concussion

Act three

Drawing of person resting on the bleachers Interview of what we can do to prevent it and what to do if you have it-Also in library with background of bookshelf Football drawings of tackles and players with concussions

Questions For Interview 1. Have you seen a concussion or have had a concussion? 2. What happens to the brain when there is a concussion?

Great description. Good main topic. Good choice of characters and teachers help. Add another act to this. Make an ending. And make a few more questions on the topic (Questions For Interview.)
 * Comments by Aaron-**